Bronze

Turnabout Girls

York

Commercial

Entry Description

Girl Power, it doesn't matter how you approach a situation, in this case turnabout, have fun with it.

Judge 1

Positives: a good idea at it's basis and casting

Improvements: sound editing and execution of the idea

Judge 2

Positives: Good idea, welcoming all types of girls to the dance. Like the first situation.

Improvements: Shorten the first sequence and put in a third and fourth example of types of girls that could take part in the dance.

Judge 3

Positives: Cute idea. Decent camera work.

Improvements: The spot drags on a bit long. It could be trimmed down to 30 seconds. This is nitpicky, but the first title should read "It's Turnabout Time!"