Commercial promoting a Hunger Games-themed Summer Reading program called "Catching The Fire"
Positives: images, Sound design and editing
Improvements: ending should have been a fade-out.
Positives: well edited
Improvements: Too long on the quest, somehow make the victory shot bigger Tie the action to the product more effectively
Positives: Nice idea; depicting reading as an adventure. Good technical elements.
Improvements: I don't know if it was intentional, but the "Catching the Fire" screen at the end didn't last nearly long enough.