Silver

Abnormal Trailer

Barrington

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Trailer to a short dramatic narrative film called Abnormal.

Judge 1

Positives: music and quality of footage

Improvements: text moved to fast to read in parts and the teaser clips were too fast as well. Hard to tell what the trailer content was. Give a little more info to the viewer.

Judge 2

Positives: Great music choice, I creates nice suspense. Nice clean titles they help a lot with establishing the narrative.

Improvements: I wish there had been more intrigue revealed visually through the shots .. the only intrigue is in the titles ... without them the piece would not work... Some of of the shots are too dark... especially the ones inside the car...

Judge 3

Positives: The editing of the clips was good. The borrowed sound from a motion picture was good. Sound quality was good overall.

Improvements: The borrowed sound clip may have been too much. I associate the music with an action movie and based on the clips wasn't sure if this was going to be an action movie or a drama.