Gold

My Happy Ending

Maine South

Music Video

Entry Description

I do not own the rights to this song. My Happy Ending by Avril Lavigne.

Judge 1

Positives: Interesting use of reverse storytelling.

Improvements: some of the continuity is 'off' for me during a couple of the car scenes, not sure who is driving or getting out of the car, or in the car. Kind of throws off the understanding of the story.

Judge 2

Positives: Telling the story going backwards was very impressive and well executed. Great editing job!

Improvements: Minor detail-tweaking the white balance.

Judge 3

Positives: This was a great narrative that had some nice twists in it. This was achieved by your character development as it was revealed through your choice of editing.

Improvements: This was a well executed video. It would have been nice if there were some shots that cut up the drama a bit. Outside of that...nice job!