Silver

Beginner Beatbox Tutorial

York

Demonstration

Entry Description

A tutorial on how to beatbox for beginners

Judge 1

Positives: Delivery by the student was relaxed and easy to watch. The two-camera approach helped enhance the presentation.

Improvements: Shooting somebody indoors with a window in the background on a bright day is a nightmare for lighting and color balance. Overall video suffered because of the choice of setting.

Judge 2

Positives: Describing how to make sounds using words with letters removed was a great idea. Using the second camera to cut to every now and then worked very well.

Improvements: I would have liked to have seen you use a couple of different locations instead of just the one location in front of the window. You also need to white balance your camera so your video doesn't look so orange. I don't mean to be the grammar police but try not to use the word "so" at the beginning of each thought. It's similar to people who say "um" or "like" too much when they talk, it's distracting.

Judge 3

Positives: Your audio was done very well and well modulated. Quick and to the point. I feel like I can learn to do this just from watching

Improvements: Need a little more head room on your camera shots. Your main wide shot was cutting off the top of your head a little too much. It is fine on a cutaway but needs to be cleaner on your main shot. Also, take the time to white balance and do color correction it makes a big difference to the viewer if the colors look correct.