Honorable Mention :: Division A

Leonard's Lament Official Movie Trailer

Barrington

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

The official movie trailer for BHS-TV's short film, Leonard's Lament. Edited by Catherine Goetze.

Judge 1

Positives: good sense of humor. good job with defining the story and the characters. good effects used throughout

Improvements: more variety of music. to break up the trailer

Judge 2

Positives: Very well put together piece with very smart copy, graphics and great visual content... Great sequence of Cindy's agents...

Improvements: I just wish in the end of the piece there would be some key culminating shot...

Judge 3

Positives: A good concept. The clip had a serious tone but was playful at the same time. It worked to have all the characters play their parts as if this were a dramatic movie clip. The boat search in the pool set the tone for humor.

Improvements: Play more on the bobble head by showing more clips that give hints as to its whereabouts. Perhaps use more of the graphics similar to the butterflies at 0:04 to add to the playfulness.