Bronze

Could've had a V8

Vernon Hills

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for V8

Judge 1

Positives: casting and sound design

Improvements: bullying overtones are unnecessary

Judge 2

Positives: Love the reaction shots when he shows up with the cheetos Good rise in tension with editing, waiting for the table to react

Improvements: Bring in V-8 in more original fashion without the pummeling Different ending, not sure that slamming him on to the table is the correct move

Judge 3

Positives: Good job of showing the product at the end.

Improvements: The editing could be a little better. Too many long, silent pauses.