3rd Place

Check Making

Bremen

Demonstration

Entry Description

How checks are made

Judge 1

Positives: The "first person" shot perspective makes this very interesting. Your explanation is easy to follow.

Improvements: The music is a bit random, especially when you transition from one song to the next. The narrative should have a more upbeat delivery... more conversational and less like reading a script.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice variety of shots. I like the sped up video shots.

Improvements: While I did like the sped up shots, I think it was a bit overused. Some other POV's besides the POV of the checks would be great.

Judge 3

Positives: Love the shooting. You really feel like you see the whole process. Great job putting ht ewhole thing together. The editing was very clean.

Improvements: The audio could have been a little cleaner. Always take the time to do good clean voice over track. Audio being clean goeas a really long way. From looking at the shots I believe you shot this on a GoPro cam. The effects you did with this cam are great but as a viewer I wanted to see some more wide shots of the factory floor and the machines themselves. It would have given me even more of a perspective as to how expansive this whole process is. You did a great job with the creative shots but don't forget to give us the important establishing shots Other than that I loved it great job.