"Keylog" is a dramatic narrative about two teenagers in the months before leaving for college.
Positives: interesting philosophic overtones. some fascinating, well-written dialogue.
Improvements: opening moment
Positives: The dialogue is very realistic, believable and well-delivered. The surprise ending is really unexpected and the camerawork and editing helps enhance the dramatic effect
Improvements: The audio sometimes sounds a little muffled, but each word is heard. Some of the wide shots of the room could be shot a little tighter.
Positives: Good dialogue writing Creative approach with surprise ending
Improvements: Pace could have been faster In editing....more close ups of facial expressions...especially when the letter is being read