3rd Place

Installing an Electrical Outlet

Bremen

Demonstration

Entry Description

Installing an electrical Outlet

Judge 1

Positives: The open was excellent..."writing to the threes" ... where three examples are used. I also thought the explanation and continuity throughout was very good. Videography was strong also.

Improvements: The narrative was clear, but unexciting. Delivery could be much improved simply by emphasizing certain words and phrases in each sentence. It would sound more authoratative.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice job. Your shot selection worked very well. Good, clean narration.

Improvements: A little more creativity with the script would be good. When you show a shot of a coffee pot it isn't necessary for the narrator to say "this is a coffee pot" because most likely your audience knows what a coffee pot looks like.

Judge 3

Positives: Good clean shooting. Good clean audio. Overall really well done.

Improvements: Make sure you dont use unnecessary transitions. You had a few dips to black that another edit or a cut to a different shot might have covered better.