Gold

Tainted Red

Maine East

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

They seem like an ordinary couple. But every couple has their secrets.

Judge 1

Positives: good change of music when the theme changed. good job with text overlay on clips to tell story

Improvements: final shots were a little darkly lit. maybe reveal a little more at the end to give more contrast to what was shown earlier

Judge 2

Positives: A seemingly ordinary story with an unexpected end twist... It makes me want to find out more...

Improvements: The graphics could be improved... the font needs to be bolder ... Most of the interior shots are badly lit...

Judge 3

Positives: I don't mind the dichotomy presented. Based on the editing, it works well. The music flows well and is interrupted by a doorbell at just the right time. "What have you done?" at the end with no image makes for a very good suspenseful end to the trailer and makes me want to see the movie. Could the final scenes fade in and out to follow the beating heart sounds?

Improvements: Could there be a better way of showing how the couple bump into each other and go from being strangers to friends?