Silver

Ghost Chasers

Bremen

Humorous Narrative

Entry Description

Ghost Hunters hunt ghosts

Judge 1

Positives: Jesse and her facial expressions were very funny, I enjoyed the effort she put into her scenes. Intentional cheesy aspects were funny. Needed more of the humor with the ghost in the window at the end.

Improvements: Plot drags on too much. Pacing needs a lot more attention. Don't be afraid to make more cuts to the content to keep the energy up with shorter scenes.

Judge 2

Positives: I loved the characters in the video. You had me smiling from the onset. The acting was just the right amount of tongue in cheek before it went over the top. There were subtle moments that were very clever. The video flow was well thought out. It made me want to watch it again. Very nice...

Improvements: Even though you are doing a parody of shot on shoulder, reality TV, make sure you have good exposure. The video becomes muddy and detail is lost. You don't want any distractions for your viewer. You lost me a little during the extreme dark segments. The video could have used some sound effects or short music bed bits.

Judge 3

Positives: Very creative, well acted and funny...lead actress was very good

Improvements: Relies too much on the parodying of the acting...funny, but a little bit goes a long way