A Time Lapse Music Video
Positives: The song did enhance the story telling, good pacing on the time lapse, smooth edits in the right spots
Improvements: I have to ask: where did you get the video from California and other places that didn't look like Chicago area? I'm hoping you didn't use stock footage??
Positives: It was technical stunning with the time lapse effect. The shots and editing are impressive. Nice job!
Improvements: It all came together well. Congrats.
Positives: There were a lot of nicely composed shots for this video (with use of nice fore, mid, and background objects). You also had a lot of nice visual edits that matched the audio track.
Improvements: It would have been nice to see more of a narrative. The beginning shot gives the idea that the viewer will go on a journey and there are many shots that feature different areas on the US, but why? Or, it would have been nice to see more of a connection between the varies of shots.