This is a commercial for a the VW GTI.
Positives: sound editing and editing
Improvements: poor video quality and better product shot.
Positives: Well shot and edited, especially like the getting out of bed sequence. Good cross cutting between the sleeper and the car.
Improvements: Instead of having the car start and garage door opening have a shot of him driving at night. More powerful ending images.
Positives: Very good! Great concept, great editing... Looks quite professional.
Improvements: Hard to say. You did a fantastic job!