3rd Place :: Division A

 

The Glenbrook South Report

Glenbrook South
News Program

Entry Description

This is a monthly long form news program focusing on Glenbrook South high school's events, clubs, and sports. A short form show is produced every week for the friday morning announcements. This show has been running for two years and we hope for it to

Judge 1

Positives: anchors lively and very good. lots of news here! interesting editing!

Improvements: headlines are nice with box... but take a breath and show some video. you can still keep a quick pace, but it would be more interesting. video a little hot in some stories. should have zoomed in on hands in sign language story to better illustrate it.

Judge 2

Positives: * You anchor was very conversational and maintained good pacing in all of her reads * Starting with the announcements was a good idea and you kept the information concise.

Improvements: * The reading of the announcements was really fast. Consider breaking them up and not giving so many at once. * Work on your story leads. The signing story wasn't really introduced. It seemed to start and end abruptly. The information was good but why you were doing it could have been better explained. * Slow things down overall. The debate collage was paced too fast and took away a little from your debaters.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice personalities and story lineup.

Improvements: May want to adjust camera position. Head room is a good thing.