Bronze

Fathers PSA

Batavia

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A public service announcement highlighting the importance for fathers to get involved in their child's life. It shows the big moment in a football game, but flashes to a dad playing catch with his son to show that that moment for his son is like the big game.

Judge 1

Positives: Well done on a simple and important message. Your creative approach was clear and effective. Great work on editing this piece.

Improvements: In the future, improve upon your audio and overall video quality. Keep up the great work!

Judge 2

Positives: Cutting in actual game footage with your own footage was a good way to get the viewers attention. The audio track you used worked with the footage from both the game and the other footage.

Improvements: The PSA didn't tell me the importance of fathers, a fact thrown would have improved it. The montage at the end was also a little too fast.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative idea blending the game with the father and son. I liked the audio over the video at the end.

Improvements: Not sure what the video wanted me to do. Give a plan of action cold the viewer.