A small PSA going over thoughts of depression. Covering the importance of helping people in need.
Positives: The graphics worked well to convey the depressed thoughts of the animated guy. The music fits the topic.
Improvements: Instead of white text on black backround it would work to have the text as thought bubbles around the animated guy. Less is more with graphics...use less words to convey the message.
Positives: Great editing and use of graphics.
Improvements: Watch where your text is, sometimes in interfered with the characters. Also, hard to judge camera and lighting when the video is completely graphic based
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