When Three Deity's threaten the home of one girl. She will fight back with her pets at her side and they won't go down so easily.
Positives: Great use of CG elements within composition. Also, the pacing of the cuts with the music worked well.
Improvements: Exposure was poor in a number of shots and could have benefitted from proper lighting. Dialogue at the beginning was indiscernible.
Positives: Great use of the CG characters and incorporating them into the story. The edit is great and keep my attention.
Improvements: While the pacing is great, not entirely sure what's going on. Lighting feels a little weak in some areas.
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