Yarnageddon (Official Trailer)

Glenbrook North

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A tortured yarn salesman kills some folks to protect his favorite knitting material.

Judge 1

Positives: Excellent cinematography - variety of shot types and compositions was very effective. Overall execution of editing pace with music enhanced story concept.

Improvements: A few shots could have benefitted from better lighting. More explanation (exposition) of why it is his "passion" would help audiences understand the idea better.

Judge 2

Positives: Funny! Great camera work and use of different angles for story telling. Good edit.

Improvements: Wish the hero shot of the yarn was lit better. Hard to tell what it was at first and not sure that was the intention.

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