A tortured yarn salesman kills some folks to protect his favorite knitting material.
Positives: Excellent cinematography - variety of shot types and compositions was very effective. Overall execution of editing pace with music enhanced story concept.
Improvements: A few shots could have benefitted from better lighting. More explanation (exposition) of why it is his "passion" would help audiences understand the idea better.
Positives: Funny! Great camera work and use of different angles for story telling. Good edit.
Improvements: Wish the hero shot of the yarn was lit better. Hard to tell what it was at first and not sure that was the intention.
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