Come Little Children

Tinley Park

Music Video

Entry Description

A story about a girl looking for someone to talk to when an unexpected friend arrives

Judge 1

Positives: The build up of the story was excellent. It was very clear what the story was about. The music sounded great and the editing and story went well with the music.

Improvements: The lighting and color of the video could use work. Example: everything seemed flat and lacked contrast.

Judge 2

Positives: You got your story across visually and made the key points clearly. There were some very clever touches, like the single set of footprints, and the pictures where the imaginary girl had disappeared. Loved the black and white flashbacks at the end.

Improvements: I felt like the girls became friends so quickly for strangers - it might have been nice to see a little tentativeness when they first meet. Though your exposure was even, some color work might have added some interest to some of the shots, especially the interiors.

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