TXT & DRV

Tinley Park

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Entry Description

Remembering why we shouldn't text and drive is sometimes worse than actually doing it

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of camera shots and angles. Also nice job of editing a good variety of different shots to tell the story.

Improvements: I was a little confused about the person in the back seat. Who is that? What does she mean by "you were there?" She could say more to help the viewer understand her role in this story. Also when you submit a video like this for an award don't disable playback on other websites. It makes it more difficult for us to judge it.

Judge 2

Positives: Your story was clear through the use of your camera angles and sad music.

Improvements: I would have a little more distinction between your present and flash back scenes

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