First Day of My Life

Tinley Park
Music Video

Entry Description

Love is hard to find even when it's with you your whole life.

Judge 1

Positives: Story was strong and established well. The choice of music went well with the video.

Improvements: Very long bandage shot. Color could have been less flat and more rich (check white balance).

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