Girl Effect Barrington

Barrington

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Girl Effect works to break the cycle of intergenerational poverty. We do this by connecting girls to each other and to the critical assets they need. We work to create lasting perception change by harnessing media in innovative ways and building social networks that develop girls' positive perceptions of themselves and shift how others see and value them.

Judge 1

Positives: The testimonials work well. The sound was nice and clear.

Improvements: I appreciate you wanting a nice backround behind the girls, but if you are shooting from inside to outside you need to put a lot more light on your subjects otherwise the backround is too bright and your subject is too dark. I think some graphics would help the testimonials.

Judge 2

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 3

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 4

Positives:

Improvements: