The Real House Dogs of Chicago

Tinley Park

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A reality show spoof with dogs

Judge 1

Positives: You get points for originality. Working with animals is notoriously challenging, and you seem to have pulled it off unscathed. Your lighting is pretty solid throughout, which is nice.

Improvements: Overall, I'd encourage you to either find some deeper insight in your satire or go with a different idea. The novelty of dogs in wigs and shirts wears off fairly quickly. I think you'd do well to create a more engaging plot, utilize different actors to voice the various characters, and get more creative with sound. At the end of the day, you've got to have a good story to tell, and I'd recommend spending a bit more time working on that.

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