Blizzard Promo

Wheaton North

Commercial

Entry Description

I short commercial I made advertising an upcoming school dance

Judge 1

Positives: Great use of music to build interest. Good use of editing to the music.

Improvements: The levels on the audio seem to be all over the place at the end. The beginning of the spot doesn't seem to flow with the end. If the dance has a color theme, why not use that theme throughout the spot?

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