Eric Mantel

Homewood-Flossmoor

News Package

Entry Description

Guitar Legend Eric Mantel gives back with lessons.

Judge 1

Positives: - I enjoyed the way the interview with Mantel was shot and edited. Nice touch! - Good student interviews!

Improvements: - Work to project your voice - It's nice that we heard Mantel's music under the piece, but it would've been great to see and hear him play in the story. Hearing one of the students play would've also enhanced your story.

Judge 2

Positives: Great job with the visuals and with the second cam on the interview subjects! Excellent job explaining why we should want to know about eric and then adding interviews on how Eric has affected schools. Great job using his music in the story!

Improvements: There were a couple of sound pops on the audio and some of it could have been smoothed out a little more to give a better flow but overall nice job.

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