Retribution

Bremen

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

When tragedy strikes a hero is needed

Judge 1

Positives: Tone was evident and well done in the writing and performance. Good camera work during outdoor b-roll scenes.

Improvements: The voices over black at the beginning left a lot to be desired - SEEING the scene would've been more effective. Also, besides the b-roll of walking through he city, the audience doesn't see a diversity of scenes or interactions with other characters.

Judge 2

Positives: Really cool camera work and story telling. I like how abstract it goes and unexpected.

Improvements: Some of the shots are really interesting and then cut next to some that are really kind of boring. Wish that they all had the mysterious vibe. Some of the lighting wasn't as strong as other parts as well.

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