Midnight Delivery

Glenbrook North

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A pizza delivery boy gets called to make a late night delivery, and stumbles upon a mysterious individual with consequential requests.

Judge 1

Positives: * Good use of changing the villain's voice.

Improvements: * Too much audio hiss throughout. * Dialogue is hard to hear (over the music and over the hiss). * Too darkly lit when it shouldn't be. A night scene with car headlights is fine, but the lead actor arguing with the villain is too dimly lit and hard to see.

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