Don't Forget About Breakfast

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A public service announcement that showcases the feelings of the most important meal of the day after it is left uneaten.

Judge 1

Positives: I liked how you edited to the music. Nice wide shots with lots with the city scenes in the backround.

Improvements: The wide shots looked nice, but edit in some close ups to break up what seemed like a long string of wide shots. Seemed kind of unresolved at the end, having Mr. Bacon and Eggs trying to interact with people and showing them walking away from him might help get the point across

Judge 2

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 3

Positives:

Improvements:

Judge 4

Positives:

Improvements: