How to Evenly Slice and Serve Watermelon

Lyons Township

Demonstration

Entry Description

This is a demonstration video about how to slice and serve watermelon. Enjoy.

Judge 1

Positives: Funny! I enjoyed watching this. Would share with coworkers. Great use of natural lighting, nice camera work and editing style.

Improvements: A little chaotic at some points, I think it could have been toned down a little without sacrificing humor. I saw an opportunity to have fun with juicy SFX, which could have added another humorous element.

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