Exposed (Trailer)

Glenbrook North

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

TJ and Aaron fight suppression at GBN

Judge 1

Positives: I think that I understand what the story is about. I think that I can grasp some of the main characters. There were some excellent beats (seeing the fight through the scope at 1:20, coupled with the sound work there was excellent).

Improvements: I do NOT understand the tone of this piece. Obviously having young people play older people undermines the credibility or verisimilitude of the piece, but I didn't understand if this was intended as a joke. The melodramatic delivery from some of the characters feels hokey (which might have been intended, but it was unclear throughout that that was the tone).

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