PSA video to encourage people to stop using the word retarded to describe individuals with disabilities
Positives: The message was clear and I really liked the call to action. The subjects in the video were powerful.
Improvements: The camera shot was not framed well, (too much headroom, too wide) which weakened the message. It didn't look as though you used lights which made the video very flat.
Positives: - the featured students with disabilities are fantastic! - nice way to deliver this message
Improvements: - The text font is hard to read and not on the screen long enough - It's difficult to understand the student in the red sweatshirt. He's speaking a little too quickly.
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