The Mixtape Rapper Interview

Homewood-Flossmoor

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

When interviews go bad.

Judge 1

Positives: I thought your lighting was quite good. It gave your actors crisp visual dimension and made them stand out from the black background. You also got good and distinct performances from your actors. I also think your pacing is solid and kept the show from dragging.

Improvements: I'd say you could work a bit more on the story itself. This kind of improv performance is hard to pull off even with experienced actors who know each other well. (Take SNL for example. It's the pinnacle of the sketch comedy world, and it misses as often as it hits.) I bet this interview is funny to the actors themselves and maybe to their friends, but for the rest of us, it feels like we're a little bit on the outside of an inside joke. Maybe some variety would help too- film in other locations, bringing on other guests, something like that.

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