Parking Pass Crunch

Glenbrook North

News Package

Entry Description

This was a news package me and my partner filmed and edited for our school's news program. Early this school year there was quite a bit of outrage from students when they found out the school sold more parking passes than there were spots available. We investigated to find out why the school would do this and what is the effect on the students.

Judge 1

Positives: - Nice use of aerial shots - Good job taking on a controversial school issue

Improvements: - Some of your video is blue. Make sure to white balance properly. - It's not clear whether there are enough spots. If there's is not clear answer from your investigation, it's alright to say so.

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