Abandoned

Homewood-Flossmoor

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Just when you thought you knew your friends.

Judge 1

Positives: * Excellent use of the face slap at 3:45 where you pan the camera away and don't show it. It's more powerful to the imagination that way. * Good use of special effects at 1:30 to introduce the title. * The first shot at 1:38 for that new sequence is effectively interesting and dramatic.

Improvements: * Much too much audio hiss throughout. * The dialogue is too hard to hear throughout. * The intro music selection doesn't match the mood of the intro sequence. * Overuse of the TV special effect. * The story is difficult to follow.

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