Mock Trial

Homewood-Flossmoor

News Package

Entry Description

A look at the trial organization

Judge 1

Positives: - Good job with your standups. Nice presence - I liked how you started with the scene from A Few Good Men. Good attention getter.

Improvements: - Hearing natural sound of mock trial practice would greatly enhance the piece. - There's a rough edit before Kaylah's soundbite, where it sounds like you took out your voice saying her name.

Judge 2

Positives: Reporter seemed very natural on camera, people sitting around a class room isn't always exciting video, made up for it with lots of cuts, lots of different angles, dissolves worked well, liked how she introduced the "star witness" with lip-flap video before the sound byte

Improvements: Stand-ups were soft focus, not a big fan of the music under the PKG

Judge 3

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Judge 4

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