#StopBullying

Barrington

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Bullying, especially Cyber Bullying, is quickly becoming an epidemic with the rise of social media. It has lead to terrible outcomes such as a decrease in self worth, self confidence, and in some cases suicide. This terrible problem needs to be stopped. We created this PSA to expose Cyber Bullying and call everyone to action to stop it.

Judge 1

Positives: Great use of social media to drive home one of the problems with social media. I really liked how the editing pace became frantic and built to the gunshot over black.

Improvements: This was well done. Perhaps there could have been tighter shots of the words to make them more powerful...like "die"' stupid, etc. Perhaps a stat about how many teens die from bullying would be a bit more powerful than one of the ones you used.

Judge 2

Positives: - In such a digital age this type of story telling worked well for your PSA - Your sound was well balanced and helped to tell the story

Improvements: -There was no camera work as it was all graphics, hard to see your camera skill set. -No lighting elements, would've been interesting to see someone typing and portray a character through lighting.

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