Kat received a first place prize from the local fire department in their annual competition for this video.
Positives: Excellent message that could help save lives. Interesting and creative shooting and editing.
Improvements: Audio was low and hard to hear at times because music overpowered the narrative. I wasn't sure what I was watching in the beginning...Sometimes it helps to have a bit of a slower pace with the editing in the beginning and then build to a fast pace.
Positives: Your lighting and camera work was impressive
Improvements: Your music was too loud and over powered your voice over, and you're editing didn't flow with the music and the choppy shots didn't fit
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