Louise vs. The Connorator and the Evil Mitchine

Neuqua Valley

Animation

Entry Description

A young girl is interrupted and bullied by a pair of troublesome robots. Her response is natural: get buff, and get revenge. Let the showdown commence.

Judge 1

Positives: excellent storyline that is easy to follow, good use of Louise's facial expressions to show fear, grit and determination. Consistent scaling to show the size difference between girl and robots helps audience appreciate her wily decision at end

Improvements: Not sure that the music needs to cut out in middle when it cuts to robots. When Louise draws up her plan at her home, it is hard to follow. Maybe a cut to a tighter shot of the plan for a second or two would help the audience.

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