Curiosity

Vernon Hills

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A trailer for a longer short film which Kat produced. She is the writer, camera, actress and editor.

Judge 1

Positives: A few of the shots were (some of the footage was) very compelling. Though incomplete and vague, I felt that the girl's voice over had one or two lines that would be excellent if this voice over narration were to be fleshed out at all.

Improvements: I think that the trailer should be more clear in conveying what the story is about. I do not know what I'm about to sit down to watch. A number of the shots seem unmotivated and unclear in what they're trying to convey. Choose the shots more wisely. This trailer is TOO LONG by 30 seconds. It should be shorter anyway (this would help it as a trailer).

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