School Safety

Neuqua Valley

News Package

Entry Description

So many stories have been in the news regarding school shootings, police, and safety, I thought the Neuqua student body should be aware of the circumstances, and know what to do if Neuqua is ever in an unsafe environment.

Judge 1

Positives: - Opening with those statistics is powerful - Very informative. You answer the questions you pose at the beginning of the story.

Improvements: - You use too much of the interviews, which takes away from actual story telling. - It would be great to hear from students about safety.

Judge 2

Positives: Great job using statistics to set up the importance of your story. Love how you used facts before jumping into the interviews. really nice job setting up your interviews- I can tell you worked with lighting. good job matching visuals to the story.

Improvements: Slight audio buzz on your first interview! When you cut a bite make sure you smooth it out!

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