Vans Commercial

Glenbrook South

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for Vans skateboarding apparel.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice sequencing of shots. Really nice camera work and shot selection. Well directed. Good concept. Talented actor/performer.

Improvements: Not much. Great work, congrats.

Judge 2

Positives: Well lit, did you color this? If so, great technique, really enjoyed the composition and grey scale with pops of greens, helped speak to the brand and keep consistency. Not an easy thing to do when shooting outside. Well done. Tight shots were working well. Great camera technique on the high speed skating scenes.

Improvements: Struggling to find room for improvement here. Possibly peppering in some of the SFX from the board, but only to increase your sound score for diversity and add in the raw, organic nature of this story.

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