Nigeria Trip

Homewood-Flossmoor

Documentary

Entry Description

A student's return to her homeland.

Judge 1

Positives: An excellent narrative illustrating a journey to Africa. The narration and on camera speaking worked very well.

Improvements: The interviews were a bit overexposed. Sound mixing could have been improved as it seemed the narration was only in the left channel and not both.

Judge 2

Positives: EXCELLENT. Great concept!! Loved this - and wanted to watch more! Loved the graphics - would have started out with that -- Clear message & intention. Well done.

Improvements: Wanted to see MORE in Nigeria - talking to family members, subjects, how were you feeling there? How did your mom feel being back?

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