One Night at NewTrier

New Trier

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

When the film makers stay late at school, it comes to find them.

Judge 1

Positives: There are some excellent beats. The villain (or evil character) dressed in all-black looks great. Truly scary. Love the shadow moving against the wall at :16 I think that you should dwell longer on the horror that is that evil dressed in black lifting the girl at :32. This is like the Alien moment that is universally recognized.

Improvements: Too much stuff in the computer lab. I do NOT love the font for the credits that shrink on screen. It's confusing to see the students rushing away to hide behind a door, then to immediately follow up on that with them chasing the bad guy a moment later.

Judge 2

Positives: Great sound and visual effects. Very dramatic. Suspenseful. Lighting and camera really supported your story.

Improvements: Some of the edited scenes could have been developed a bit more for the audience to wonder. Some seemed up-cut.

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