Smooth Criminal

Batavia

Music Video

Entry Description

An inspector try to solve the case of a bloody assault and robbery.

Judge 1

Positives: I really appreciated that you went all in and made a video with an elaborate plot. Deserves a lot of bonus points in general for taking a leap of faith with something complicated using a multiple actors and a lot of setups. Great art direction/props

Improvements: Was a little confused as to what was going on in the plot, sort of lost me in the editing. I was especially confused by the version of the song- although I may be lacking context? If this version of the song was an original recording by the students, then kudos to you, if not then its just an odd choice. (song did not alter my scoring) What didnt work was that the interrogator/police officer guy was wearing american apparel hoodies and north face jackets.

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