Crystals

Geneva

Music Video

Entry Description

Crystals Music Video

Judge 1

Positives: Very very very good camera work. Cant stress this enough. Honestly just great job. The camera work and editing stood out as the best in this category.

Improvements: A little confused as to what was going in the plot at times. Some of the shots were a little too close up for me (the close cuts to the lips occasionally) just a bit jarring. Overall this video was very good, I was just a bit confused- i couldnt explain back to you what happened in the video really.

Judge 2

Positives: Some beautiful shots and lighting effects. I like how you used some interesting "outtakes" moments from your actors' performances - some nice, natural moments that another editor might have passed over.

Improvements: Though you may not have intended there to be a literal narrative here, I found the 2 girls and 2 parallel storylines to be a little confusing - I was waiting to see where or how they would fit together somehow. Some of the long shots of glittery faces and mouths might have been broken up a bit more with additional variety to keep it interesting.

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