Jim Smith's Return

Eisenhower

News Package

Entry Description

Jim Smith, former 2x Super Bowl Champ, returns to his high school to give them the golden 50th Anniversary Football.

Judge 1

Positives: - great use of music bed - shot the intro walk well

Improvements: -a little more enthusiasm in delivery - we could've learned a little more about Jim's past. I don't know anything about football legends, but I would've liked to see a little more video or pix of him.

Judge 2

Positives: I loved the subject you picked. excellent choice of the subject and capturing such a great I loved the interviews you did- I would have loved to see a few more quick bites from other students/staff to fill it out a little more. Great job with the visual-- very active and engaging and your nat sots!

Improvements: The audio on the first soundbite with Jim was out of sync- but I loved the content of the bite and the conversational way you asked it. a couple other spots also needed to be tightened up in editing but loved the content! Reading VO is hard- a little more practice so it doesn't feel like you are directly reading and you'll have it down!

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