The Groundskeeper

Barrington

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Created by Giacomo Moriondo and Tommy Derken, this video is biographical movie about an unknown legend who tends to the BHS turf.

Judge 1

Positives: - Great pacing. Great use of BROLL over the interview. - Dedication to character development.

Improvements: - Would have liked to of seen more varied shots and action. I think there were some missed opportunities to really play with this guy who ultimately doesn't need to do anything to the turf itself, but tries to anyways. - Always watch your grammar and spelling when using text graphics. It's okay that the subtitles are written to match the broken english, but grammatical errors such as using the wrong "hear", can take the viewer out of the experience.

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