Civil War Reenactment

Barrington

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Entry Description

Tommy Derken heads over to Citizens Park as Barrington celebrates 150 years with a civil war reenactment.

Judge 1

Positives: - Beautiful shots. Great variety of pictures. - I loved the interview with the young re-enactor. Very creative!

Improvements: - First interview has a shadow over his face. - Your standup intro is a bit wordy.

Judge 2

Positives: Clever job asking the questions of what was happening during the time frame- great way to get the audience involved! Great job with the broll!

Improvements: Why wasn't the day a success for the union army? if it was the last day of the war didn't they win and Lee Surrendered? I would have liked a little more information about the event and what it was reenacting, but great job with the interviews and standup you did have! Try to get the subject to answer in full sentences so you don't have to include off camera questions! Also, when you here your subject answer with pronouns and it, try to have them redo it using the words of what is happening because it will be more clear to your audience.

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