A PSA about AIDS that happens to be an animation.
Positives: Nice use of animation and a good topic for a PSA.
Improvements: It was pretty complex, terms that were not easily understood. I did not quite tell a story from start to finish. A personal story could have made it more emotional, it was too technical.
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